This is really good - the body proportions look realistic. The only thing is -- it's not a crime for a woman's thighs to touch... they are too far apart in this picture. Her hips are too wide for her thighs not to touch and anyway perceptionofbeautyblather. You seem to be a great artist, though -- I know the extra lines are a "sketch" thing but I like how they affect the picture
Wonderful rough style. This picture actually reminds me a lot of Seirei no Moribito. Have you seen it? Any ATLA fan would love the series. They use rough-looking sketches like these in the episode breaks and on some of the packaging. This outfit and hairdo are somewhat reminiscent of Balsa.